A Diptych for Pain

Words after words double march

in not just your war

Unwritten poems upon poems pile up

in bleeding hearts

…the squeaking hinges

let love in through the leaves

seize your pen my co- warrior

Press the ink, take a hit

This war soon be over

Heals writing; you are worth more than this


written by K P on 6/12/2016 after talking to V.S.
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6 thoughts on “A Diptych for Pain

  1. Thank You intrudesite. we are worthy of a lot of things but we are unaware… We have to travel inside and dig deep. That requires a calm mind and peaceful soul.

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  4. The “soonness” of the end of the war is a topic of rather subjective interpretation

    Write yes, but in my opinion it’s possibly to no end really – at most it passes time, occupies us and might just help temporarily drain out some of our excess emotional discharges

    I admire your positive perspective towards the end, but I personally don’t have the capacity to even be in agreement

    Beautiful piece of writing though

  5. The “soonness” of the end of the war is a topic of rather subjective interpretation

    Write yes, but in my opinion it’s possibly to no end really – at most it passes time, occupies us and might just help temporarily drain out some of our excess emotional discharges festering inside

    I admire your positive perspective towards the end, but I personally don’t have the capacity to evenThe “soonness” of the end of the war is a topic of rather subjective interpretation

    Write yes, but in my opinion it’s possibly to no end really – at most it passes time, occupies us and might just help temporarily drain out some of our excess emotional discharges

    I admire your positive perspective towards the endend, I sometimes can passively feed off other people’s positivity, but I personally don’t have the capacity to even be in agreement

    Beautiful piece of writing though be in agreement

    Beautiful piece of writing though

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